Loucifer
Aes Sedai
Plurima Mortis Imago
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Post by Loucifer on Feb 20, 2007 17:26:39 GMT -1
I just thought I'd try an experiment here and write a poem on the spur of the moment. It may not be perfect, but here goes...
A dark and shadowed mind Peers through the windows of wisened eyes And glances at world around. Injustice turns the knife In a wound that grows day and night As I lie bleeding on the ground.
And as the time goes by My blood boils and my throat cries It's unearthly screams again. One day when I am old, I will make a stand and be bold I should stand now, if not... then when?
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Post by Sheila Widdershins on Feb 20, 2007 17:37:52 GMT -1
Wow, excellent! And it fits so perfectly, hehe... ;D I like. ^^ Very nice rhythms, summat to keep an eye out for. Mm, recently I've been debating on whether or not to put up more of my poetry on here, but.... there's... just too many XD I thought of just taking all the ones I have listed on Witchvox and reposting them here, but it would take me forever and a day. I'll post the latest ones, though, once I've finished typing them up ;D
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Loucifer
Aes Sedai
Plurima Mortis Imago
Posts: 96
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Post by Loucifer on Feb 20, 2007 17:44:00 GMT -1
Thank you - I'm glad you like it! I'm inspired to write more here now! As for your new stuff - how about posting your favourites?
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Post by Sheila Widdershins on Feb 20, 2007 19:11:39 GMT -1
;D Please do! Ahh, well, I could post my favorites I suppose... that's still a lot ;D Actually, I promised meh brother to send him a number of poems, those I definitely would consider posting. Hh, when I have time
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Loucifer
Aes Sedai
Plurima Mortis Imago
Posts: 96
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Post by Loucifer on Feb 21, 2007 7:09:32 GMT -1
There's no rush!
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Post by Sheila Widdershins on Feb 21, 2007 9:45:46 GMT -1
Good point ;D I don't have all of them sellected anyway... hh, I dunno which of the selected to post either XD
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ionna
Accepted
of celtic decedent true magic is not learned but in side you from birth
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Post by ionna on Nov 30, 2009 1:13:33 GMT -1
your poem is a very dark truth of the world we live in and the blindness of it all ! i love it you should right more often seems your gifted.
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